![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() I'm frustrated because I'm not sure if I want to read more in the series or not. I am very interested in the subject matter and the storytelling is generally worth reading, but I think this book would have benefited from a professional publishing house's editing. I don't agree with the author's changing names of actual historical characters in order to simplify for the reader. These things disturbed my enjoyment of the story. Wald Afire: Volume 2 (The Wald Chronicles) by Born, Jason at .uk - ISBN 10: 1492731269 - ISBN 13: 9781492731269 - CreateSpace Independent. not knowing when to use "lie" or "lay," using "ascent" for "assent," using "severally" to mean "severely." I don't know if this was poor editing or lack of fluency in the author. Also, there were a number of instances of grammatical errors that bugged me: e.g. He only mentioned 2 books on his list of sources. I would have given this book a better rating, but there were some historical details with which I disagreed (his take on crossing the Rubicon displacing the role of the never mentioned Primus Pilus with a Camp Prefect something he calls a "military toga" which is apparently a full military uniform plus a toga) which made me question the author's body of knowledge. ![]()
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